Showing posts with label English. Show all posts
Showing posts with label English. Show all posts

Sunday, 15 March 2015

The Woman on Platform 8

Summary

Arun, is a 12 year old boy. After leaving his parents, he travels by bus and arrives Ambala at about twelve noon. He sits on the platform no.8 at Ambala station. His train is to leave hours later at midnight. So he continues to watch the changing scene around. Soon he loses interest in his surroundings. He feels lonely and bored.

Suddenly, Arun hears a soft voice from behind. It is a woman in white saree. She looks pale and has dark kind eyes. She wears no jewels. After a brief introduction, she invites Arun for some refreshment at the station dining room. She takes his hand and leads him away. Arun does not refuse the invitation as he feels it would be too impolite to reject it. The woman seems to take a pleasure in watching him eat.

Arun comes back to platform No.8. Now he opens up and tells her about his school, his friends, his likes and dislikes. The woman speaks very little and listens to him intently. Arun's school fellow Satish, along with his mother, appears on the platform.

Satish's mother asks Arun if the lady is his mother. Before Arun utters a word, the woman comes to his rescue and says that she is his mother. Satish's mother, says that there are many suspicious characters hanging around. She behaves that one should be very careful of strangers. The woman does not feel embarrassed. Satish's mother looks sternly at Arun and advises him to be careful in absence of his mother, and never talk to strangers. Arun irritates her by contradicting her,I like strangers.

Satish seems to agree with Arun as he grins at him. After some time, the train steams in. Satish and Arun board it. Satish 's mother and the stranger stand on the platform talking to the boys. The train starts, Satish says, Good-bye, mother. They wave to each other. Not to be left behind, Arun also utters the farewell words, Good-bye, mother. He continues to gaze at the woman until she disappears in the crowd.


   What would you do if you met a stranger at the train station??

Tuesday, 3 March 2015

How to write a summary in 5 easy steps

 How to write a summary in 5 steps (Video).



In this video. I give you 5 easy steps for writing a summary.

1. Do a quick read of the passage, taking note of the story content as you do this. Understand what the story is about.

2. Read the passage again, highlighting ONLY the main points in each paragraph and the main characters. Minor details and explanations should be left out of summary writing. It might be a good idea to highlight the main characters in a different color from the main points of the passage. Less confusing.

3. Take note of the what, when, where, and who of the passage.

4. Write out your summary based on these notes.

5. Check your summary, make changes as needed and if there is a word count, check you are within the word limit

If there is a word count, then you must not go over that at all. It's best if the word count for the summary is as close to as possible to the maximum number of words given. This will mean your summary content is accurate. Eg: Word count is 120 words. Your summary should not exceed this or fall way short. Best is to have a summary of around 115 to 118 words.

Summary exercise courtesy of TKPS, based on The Witches by Roald Dahl

When? (When did this scene take place?) - On the first morning after the author's arrival.

Where? (Where did this take place?) - At the hotel

Who? (Who were the characters?) - The author, chambermaid, Mr Stringer and Grandma

What? (What happens in each paragraph of the passage?) :
Beginning - On the first day, the chambermaid saw one of my mice in my hotel room and shrieked loudly.
Middle - I was reported to Mr Stringer, the hotel manager. There was an unpleasant scene with Mr Stringer, Grandma and me.
End - Mr Stringer would not allow mice in the hotel. Grandma said the hotel was full of rats. Mr Stringer said there weren't any rats in the hotel but Grandma said that she saw one that morning.

The full summary as written:

On the first day, the chambermaid saw one of my mice in my hotel room and shrieked loudly. I was reported to Mr Stringer, the hotel manager. There was an unpleasant scene with Mr Stringer, Grandma and me. Mr Stringer would not allow mice in the hotel. Grandma said the hotel was full of rats anyway. Mr Stringer said that there no rats in the hotel but Grandma said that she saw one that morning.
Word count: 77 words
Total number of words in the passage: 158

Practice and soon you will be writing a summary like a pro!


Do you think summaries are helpful to you?

Monday, 2 March 2015

Imaginative Writing

4 Easy steps to write an Imaginative Writing (A video)  .


There are many different types of writing out there. For the purpose of this video, we will look at creative writing and the simple steps to take in writing a creative essay.

What is creative writing? It is a broad statement that covers every form of narrative writing from poetry to feature articles in newspapers to novels - the list is endless.

Loosely put, it excludes anything academic and technical.

Let's look at how to write a creative essay:

First step: Choose your subject. When choosing a subject, pick something you and others may find interesting. It may not have to be a subject that you know well, though that helps!

If the subject is something you find interesting, but do not know much about, research it!

That will be Step 2: All good writers research the background to their essay/story/novel, etc. If need be, talk to relevant authorities. Ask questions and learn more about the topic.

Take some time and mull over your topic. Look at it from different perspectives. Write down all thoughts that occur to you on the subject, relevant or random, it does not matter. You can sift through it later and decide on what you want to use. You never know. You might end up with enough material for more than one essay.

Onto the next step, Step 3, where you put down an outline of how, what, when, where and who your essay is all about. This will guide and keep you on the straight and narrow of the story without taking you down a meandering path. Then its time to flesh out these how, what, when, where and who questions as that will build the foundation of the story.

Once you have the first 3 steps done, you can proceed to Step 4, writing the story. Using the outline you have set out, start with the introduction. In the introduction, the setting for the creative essay is established. Here is where you establish the place, time and scenery for the main subject of the essay.

Next we come to the body of the essay. The plot of the essay is developed in the body. It can be made up of just one paragraph, in the case of a short story, or several paragraphs, when the story is longer. Each paragraph is to showcase one main idea. The movement from one paragraph to another has to be smooth and fluid without choppiness.

This is where transitions come in useful. Briefly, transitions are words like 'yet', 'and', 'but' and so on. They allow the essay to flow seamlessly from one idea to another. They are usually used in the middle of a sentence. But, they can be used in the beginning to emphasis a point. I just did that. I used 'but' in the beginning of a sentence when it is usually used in the middle. This lays emphasis on the content of the sentence following the 'but' and shows the continuity of the thought process from the previous sentence. Just be careful not to over use transitions in your essay.

Other transitions which we use all the time are words like 'however','also' and 'therefore'.

Finally, we come to the conclusion of the creative essay. The conclusion is where the whole plot comes together and is tidied up ...or not. That depends on you, the author, on how you want the essay to end. It can be neat and tidy, with a 'happily ever after' like fairy-tale ending or in can be a cliffhanger, where the ending is left shrouded in suspense. The ending or conclusion of your essay is important, so don't rush it or end it abruptly. It must leave a strong enough impact that the story remains in the reader's mind after he finishes reading it.

Now that your creative essay is done, check it thoroughly for spelling and grammatical errors. Change whatever does not read or flow right. Think about the effect the essay will have on the reader. Ask someone else to proofread it for you. Very often we miss errors in our own writing that others will pick up.

What are the ways to proof read your documents?

Sunday, 15 February 2015

Informal Letter: A Brief Guide

Informal Letters


How do you keep in touch withn your friends and your family? Do you write letters, emails, speak on telephone, send cards, text using a mobile phone, or use a social networking site such as Facebook?

Sometimes we need to communicate a lot of information and a letter or email may be the easiest way to do this. We may write a letter to mark a special occasion or to communicate something that's difficult to say face-to-face; for example, a letter expressintg our sympathy when somebody has died, or a letter sending our congrats to a birth of a new born baby. These are personal letters. Personal letters may be short or long but they are usually chatty and informal.



Have you written an informal letter to anyone?





Thursday, 12 February 2015

Tenses

What are tenses?

 Tenses is a verb-based method used to indicate the time, and sometimes the continuation or completeness, of an action or state in relation to the time of speaking. 


Why do you think tenses are used?